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20 Ways to Show Extreme Fear in Your Writing

As I dive into researching signs of fear for my horror WIP, I wanted to share some of the most compelling and visceral reactions I’ve come across. Whether you’re writing a chilling scene or crafting a character’s panic, these 20 signs of fear can help bring tension and realism to your story.

Physical Reactions

Hyperventilating — sucking in air but never feeling like it’s enough

Chest tightens — feels like a weight or hands pressing down

Limbs shaking violently, knees buckling

Complete loss of muscle control — collapsing or unable to stand

Cold sweat soaking through clothes

Heart hammering so hard they feel it in their throat or head

Tunnel vision — the world narrowing down to one terrifying focal point

Ringing in the ears or sudden deafness, like the world drops away

Dizziness / feeling faint / vision blurring

Dry mouth — unable to speak or even scream

Uncontrollable Behavior

Screaming / sobbing / gasping — involuntary vocal outbursts

Panic run — bolting without thinking, tripping over everything

Clawing at their own skin / chest / throat — like trying to escape their body

Begging / pleading out loud even if no one’s there

Repeating words or phrases — “No, no, no” / “This isn’t happening”

Hiding instinctively — diving under tables, closets, or corners

Desperate grabbing — reaching for someone, anything solid

Loss of bladder or bowel control (for extreme terror)

Total mental shutdown — frozen, slack-jawed, staring blankly

Memory blackout — later can’t recall what happened during the worst moment

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I need help shadowpeach enjoyers

I remember reading a fanfic on Ao3 about Macaque suffering from rigor mortis as a consequence of resurrection, and then Wukong takes him to the hot springs to see if they help(?), but I don't remember the name, and I want to read it again.

If anyone knows the fic I'm talking about, please send me the link

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1 month ago

Normal day

Normal Day

Macaque is just being a little shit

Also Macaque is so damn fun to draw!

I haven't had ths much fun drawing in a while.

Also who is someone you like to draw a lot!

And does anyone have any suggestions for anything LMK to draw?

It can be platonic or Romantic or just a character!

And sorry for yapping

Goodbye have a nice day viewer!


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1 month ago

Accidentally Raising the fastest thing Alive

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Rating:

Teen And Up Audiences

Archive Warning:

Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings

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Gen

Fandom:

Sonic the Hedgehog - All Media Types

Relationship:

Dr. Eggman | Dr. Robotnik & Sonic the Hedgehog

Characters:

Sonic the Hedgehog

Miles "Tails" Prower

Amy Rose (Sonic the Hedgehog)

Dr. Eggman | Dr. Robotnik

Knuckles the Echidna

Guardian Units of Nations | G.U.N.

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eggdad

Sonic raised by eggman

Eggman raises Sonic

Evil Sonic

i guess?

not really - Freeform

Sonic is fluent in Japanese

Sonic the Hedgehog Speaks Japanese

Sonic the Hedgehog Uses Sign Language

Japanese Sonic the Hedgehog

Selectively Mute Sonic the Hedgehog

Sonic The hedgehog is Mute for a while

Manipulative Sonic the Hedgehog

Sassy Sonic the Hedgehog

Fluff

Sonic the Hedgehog is Miles "Tails" Prower's Parent

Overpowered Sonic the Hedgehog

Unhinged Sonic the Hedgehog

Miles Tails Prower can use sign language

Smart Sonic the Hedgehog

Intelligent Sonic The hedgehog

Bookworm Sonic The hedgehog

Sonic The hedgehog loves reading Romance

Sonic The Hedgehog is a Theater kid

Sonic the hedgehog has oscar worthy acting skills

Sonic the hedgehog has a computer science degree

Parent Dr. Eggman | Dr. Robotnik

Dr Eggman raised Sonic the hedgehog

Dr Eggman is Sonic the hedgehog's Parent

Adoptive older sibling Sonic the hedgehog

Good Older Sibling Sonic the Hedgehog

Good Sibling Sonic the Hedgehog

Older Sibling Sonic the Hedgehog

Younger sister Sage

Younger brother Metal

Doting brother Sonic the hedgehog

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Other Additional Tags to Be Added

Even though Sonic is raised by an Old fat white guy

He will have asian manners

Embrace the stereotypes

Emotionally Intelligent Sonic the Hedgehog

Summary:

Eggman finds a little blue hedgehog in an alley. The orphanges don't have any space. So,he'll take care of the hedgehog till the orphanage has space. He won't get attached *(Will He?)


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1 month ago

LMK Art Suggestions!

Please provide a reference or description of the pose if possible!

Allowed for Art suggestion

✅ Memes

✅ Single-character art

✅Romantic ships

✅Platonic art

✅ Familial art

✅ Enemies art

✅ Comics that are 4 panels or under

Not allowed

❌Pro-ship

❌Comics over 5 panels unless I like the idea a lot

❌ Problematic stuff

❌ Suggestive. I still do Romance . I'm just not comfortable with drawing suggestive stuff.


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2 months ago

This is amazing OP

I never saw the resemblence until now

💜🍑Why is "War Of Hearts" by Ruelle such a Shadowpeach coded song from Mac's point of view? 💜🍑

MINORS DO NOT INTERACT

MINORS DO NOT FOLLOW

MINORS DO NOT REBLOG

Come to me In the night hours I will wait for you And I can't sleep 'Cause thoughts devour Thoughts of you consume

💜🍑Why Is "War Of Hearts" By Ruelle Such A Shadowpeach Coded Song From Mac's Point Of View? 💜🍑

Ooh-ooh Ooh-ooh Ooh-ooh, ooh-ooh

Ooh-ooh Ooh-ooh Ooh-ooh, ooh-ooh

I can't help but love you Even though I try not to I can't help but want you

💜🍑Why Is "War Of Hearts" By Ruelle Such A Shadowpeach Coded Song From Mac's Point Of View? 💜🍑

I know that I'd die without you

💜🍑Why Is "War Of Hearts" By Ruelle Such A Shadowpeach Coded Song From Mac's Point Of View? 💜🍑
💜🍑Why Is "War Of Hearts" By Ruelle Such A Shadowpeach Coded Song From Mac's Point Of View? 💜🍑

Stay with me a little longer I will wait for you Shadows creep And want grows stronger Deeper than the truth

Ooh-ooh Ooh-ooh Ooh-ooh, ooh-ooh

Ooh-ooh Ooh-ooh Ooh-ooh, ooh-ooh

💜🍑Why Is "War Of Hearts" By Ruelle Such A Shadowpeach Coded Song From Mac's Point Of View? 💜🍑

I can't help but love you Even though I try not to I can't help but want you

💜🍑Why Is "War Of Hearts" By Ruelle Such A Shadowpeach Coded Song From Mac's Point Of View? 💜🍑

I know that I'd die without you

💜🍑Why Is "War Of Hearts" By Ruelle Such A Shadowpeach Coded Song From Mac's Point Of View? 💜🍑

I can't help but be wrong in the dark 'Cause I'm overcome in this war of hearts

💜🍑Why Is "War Of Hearts" By Ruelle Such A Shadowpeach Coded Song From Mac's Point Of View? 💜🍑

I can't help but want oceans to part 'Cause I'm overcome in this war of hearts

💜🍑Why Is "War Of Hearts" By Ruelle Such A Shadowpeach Coded Song From Mac's Point Of View? 💜🍑

I can't help but love you Even though I try not to I can't help but want you I know that I'd die without you

💜🍑Why Is "War Of Hearts" By Ruelle Such A Shadowpeach Coded Song From Mac's Point Of View? 💜🍑
💜🍑Why Is "War Of Hearts" By Ruelle Such A Shadowpeach Coded Song From Mac's Point Of View? 💜🍑
💜🍑Why Is "War Of Hearts" By Ruelle Such A Shadowpeach Coded Song From Mac's Point Of View? 💜🍑

I can't help but be wrong in the dark 'Cause I'm overcome in this war of hearts I can't help but want oceans to part 'Cause I'm overcome in this war of hearts

💜🍑Why Is "War Of Hearts" By Ruelle Such A Shadowpeach Coded Song From Mac's Point Of View? 💜🍑
💜🍑Why Is "War Of Hearts" By Ruelle Such A Shadowpeach Coded Song From Mac's Point Of View? 💜🍑
💜🍑Why Is "War Of Hearts" By Ruelle Such A Shadowpeach Coded Song From Mac's Point Of View? 💜🍑

Ooh-ooh Ooh-ooh Ooh-ooh, ooh-ooh

💜🍑Why Is "War Of Hearts" By Ruelle Such A Shadowpeach Coded Song From Mac's Point Of View? 💜🍑
💜🍑Why Is "War Of Hearts" By Ruelle Such A Shadowpeach Coded Song From Mac's Point Of View? 💜🍑

Ooh-ooh Ooh-ooh Ooh-ooh, ooh-ooh

💜🍑Why Is "War Of Hearts" By Ruelle Such A Shadowpeach Coded Song From Mac's Point Of View? 💜🍑
💜🍑Why Is "War Of Hearts" By Ruelle Such A Shadowpeach Coded Song From Mac's Point Of View? 💜🍑
1 month ago

Is there a graphic novel version of Journey to the West that sticks really closely to the original story?

I want to start reading Journey to the west. But, I can't really handle reading the entire thing. My concentration level is low. Is there a faithful adaptation that I can read?


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